I decided to promote Wordsplosion on Facebook and got some instant unintentional help.  Also: geography fail.

Wait, I don’t see the problem with this! »« Ah, I get it now!

• The sentence should start with a capital letter
• “its was” should be “It was”
• Both instances of “further” should be “farther” (as she is talking about physical distance)
• “egypt” should be capitalized
• “africa” should be capitalized
• “thats” should be “that’s”
• Egypt is a country within Africa, and is one of the easternmost countries in that continent (thus being farther away from North America than most other African countries)
• too many exclamation points